Tuesday, August 6, 2013

Creative writing- KIDNAPPED!!!

"Lily! Lily!" " come out Lily!!" Simon and Mallory was amdly calling for lily. Simon was a thin and everage boy. He had big eyes. Mallory was an everage girl, too. and She was good at sports. She always got an A+ at sports. One thought got through her brain. "Simon!! She was a t attic all day long right? Lets go to the attic!!" They ran up to the attic not being able to here the crashing sound, When they opened the door of the attic, Their body froze. Books were flying around the room!!Something invisible was throwing the books in the air!! SMACK!!! One of the books hit Mallory hard on her head. Blood dropped from her head. " Oh!! Whatever that thing is, It's so dead!!" Mallory murmured fiercely. She went downstairs and brought a baseball bat. WHAM!!! " Ow!!" Something howled. It came visible. Simon grabbed it and had a close look at it. IT hsd pig's nose, and narrow green eyes. mallory punched it. " Where is Lily!!" " Who is Lily? Ow!! Stop that!!" " What are you anyway?" Simon asked slowly. " I am Henry the Goblin!" Mallory stabbed the goblin's stomach with her bat. " Where is Lily!!" " I don't know!! Maybe Ogeres or fairies got that Lily!!" Goblin said, desperately. " Ogeres or fairies??" Simons face became white as paper. Mallory snatched Simon and Henry's collars. " Come on!! Lets go to the forest then!!" Goblin stood up and ran in to the forest, and Mallory followed him carrying fainted Simon. Forest was wrapped with thick fog, and little lights were buzzing around. THUMP. THUMP. THUMP. " Who is this!! I smell humans and a goblin!!" the voice boommed. Lily was locked in a cage next to the ogere. mallory threw her bat and crashed the cage. Click Here for Ending 1 Click Here for Ending 2 Click Here for Ending 3

3 comments:

  1. I enjoyed reading your horrific story on four children getting lost in the forest. Still, you could have explained more on the setting: How did Simon and Mallory find out that Lily was lost? Also, be sure to check spelling mistakes. :)

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  2. This story is soooooo INTERESTING!!!

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